Map Completed

Hallo EF, I have just finished finished my first map! I would really be honored if you guys could take a look at it and tell me what you think and what I would need to change in order to get my map in to one of the up coming EF patches! This is my first map that I have created on coh, but have exp. in css map making. I think for this being my first map I have done a kick ass job with it. Please take a look and tell me what you think!

http://rapidshare.com/files/345099107/NewScenario1.sga.htm

Post some screenshots here :P.

Play it :P

It was fun to play but that's probably due more to the game than the map. This map needs a lot more detail, it looks like it was plonked together in less than an hour.

Hallo im sorry I pushed the map out to soon. I know it needs alot of work  but iv been working on that. I have also created a forum on gamereplays.com to get my map noticed. Please give me another shot to get this map in EF. Look at the forum and please who ever reads this add ur coments and everything else in that forum. I have plenty of time on my hands to make maps and keep up with all advice so please share! Like I said im new to mapping in coh and have exp. in css mapping. I know now that rts mapping is lots harder then css. So please Im begging you guys just to please help and support me!

http://www.gamereplays.org/community/index.php?showtopic=578724